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Post by Childish Meltzer on Thu Aug 31, 2017 3:20 am

Get a MF Doom vibe and I mean that in the most positive way possible

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Post by Decided Villain on Thu Aug 31, 2017 3:31 am

Dislikes : The tattoos could be faded heaps, or maybe just not be there? (I actually hate the back tattoo. Also the plague doctor tattoo is odd. Like he is so into his gimmick he tattooed it. That design could be used in future attires instead) The Mohawk thing under the mask strap doesn't work for me, but that could just be me.

Likes : The whole style, with the black and white is awesome. You also pulled on my love for Watchmen/Rorschach soooo I like it. The jacket is also nice. The SR thing is cool because its like a finger print thing, and you're a detective.

For improvements, you could add a rectangle underneath the Rorschach and make it white, this will cover the holes of the hockey mask and make the Rorschach stand out more.

If this thing is half 50's detective, half Rorschach I might cry.

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Post by PREDICTION KING on Thu Aug 31, 2017 5:17 am

Love the tattoos. It lacks Puma logos tho.

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Post by Papa Maurie on Thu Aug 31, 2017 6:39 am

yea looks good aside from tattoos and those 10 inch calves

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Post by C9 Suntan on Thu Aug 31, 2017 8:14 am

Maurie wrote:yea looks good aside from tattoos and those 10 inch calves

Whats wrong with big calves

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Post by Topher Mod on Thu Aug 31, 2017 10:34 am

Thoughts please, used  a face scan.....which i never do, cuz it would look shit everytime i do..... But i thought i'd try again.... cuz why not.


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Post by Austin on Thu Aug 31, 2017 11:12 am

topher316 wrote:Thoughts please, used  a face scan.....which i never do, cuz it would look shit everytime i do..... But i thought i'd try again.... cuz why not.

Face scans are typically ass but this is very good.

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Post by Tim on Thu Aug 31, 2017 11:16 am

Yeah that one blended well. Additionally, Tops Willis is a very handsome man.
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Post by Topher Mod on Thu Aug 31, 2017 11:21 am

Tim wrote:Yeah that one blended well. Additionally, Tops Willis is a very handsome man.

Indeed.... Die Hard No Strings Attached

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Post by Topher Mod on Thu Aug 31, 2017 11:31 am

Thanks for comments guys

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Post by krzy on Thu Aug 31, 2017 11:48 am

Decided Villain wrote:Dislikes : The tattoos could be faded heaps, or maybe just not be there? (I actually hate the back tattoo. Also the plague doctor tattoo is odd. Like he is so into his gimmick he tattooed it. That design could be used in future attires instead) The Mohawk thing under the mask strap doesn't work for me, but that could just be me.

Likes : The whole style, with the black and white is awesome. You also pulled on my love for Watchmen/Rorschach soooo I like it. The jacket is also nice. The SR thing is cool because its like a finger print thing, and you're a detective.

For improvements, you could add a rectangle underneath the Rorschach and make it white, this will cover the holes of the hockey mask and make the Rorschach stand out more.

If this thing is half 50's detective, half Rorschach I might cry.
Tattoos are something I've rarely done with my caws, so thought I'd finally double down with experimenting and the feedback on that is especially helpful. I agree about the back tattoo (I just wanted something with color) and the hair (so few options to work with, and I didn't want him to be bald, so I just settled with that.)
appreciate the feedback and that tip with the mask. Just tryna bless cop with a caw he won't be ashamed to book.

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