Weekly Open Challenge

*Jay Netsuo Comes Out Onto the Ring With a Microphone*


Jay Netsuo: So I Don't Want to Be Out Here and Talk to You Pathetic Wastes of Space, But If I'm Gonna Get My Message Across, This is How It's Gonna Go.

*Pauses for a Second*

Jay Netsuo: I'm Gonna Be the Man of This Company and That Means I Gotta Show it. So Day In, Day Out. Week After Week, I Will Take Up a Weekly Open Challenge or In My Words, A Weekly Massacre Because There isn't a Chance in Hell That You Or Anyone Else In That Locker Room Is Gonna Get Out In Perfect Shape. Because No Matter if You Struggle or Fight Back, I Will End You. I've Shown That Week After Week. Show After Show. I'm Coming for That Heavyweight Championship. But To Be Fair, I'm Gonna Take on All the Competition I need to Get to the Top. So, Aaron, I'll Be There and You Arent Gonna Be the Only Champion I'll Be Coming After. Marko, I Know Your History. Sure You've Destroyed Person After Person, But I am A God Towards You!! I Am A Machine!! And I Will Not Be Put Down By You. So Whenever, Wherever, It Doesn't Matter. I'm Gonna Be Here and I am Gonna Take What is Rightfully Mine.

*Drops Mic and Goes to Locker Room*

To be the man, you gotta beat the man...

Please,Son. You Aint No Man. Step Out Of the Way If You Don't want to Be Beaten to Where You Gotta Get out of That Ring in a Stretcher.

Seeing that Tim is a Champion that makes him a man. I would like a future shot at that title Tim but I will wait til I earn a shot, no need for me just demanding like I did with the tag titles.

Who are you?

HE'S JAY FREAKIN' NETSUO

What He ^^ Said.

Word of advice, your promos would be easier to read if you took care of these points.

Color Code to differentiate dialogue and actions.

Don't capitalize every beginning letter of every word. Only names and beginning of sentences.

Back to coding, maybe bold or italicize your actions.

Other than that, you got a pretty good heel on your hands and your promos would be fun to read.

OCD Made Capitalizing A Problem. Sorry. Other Than That, Okay.

HellishxHades wrote:Seeing that Tim is a Champion that makes him a man. I would like a future shot at that title Tim but I will wait til I earn a shot, no need for me just demanding like I did with the tag titles.

How am I the man? This is UnMatched/Intensity. The Man is Marko Punish.

Either Way, I Gotta Kick Someone's Ass Next Show. Takers??